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The earth that roams

To you,the earth is at a stand still,
But to me it roams.

It roams our open Galaxey,

A vast place of nothing but space,

And the only thing it does is roam,

but never out of place!

 

To you the earth is at a stand still,

But to me it roams.

 

It roams around and around the sun

day and night,

night and day,

keeping upright,

keeping bright.

 

To you the earth maybe at a stand still........

But to me it roams.

 

 

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  • nichtmich silver member
    July 6, 2008
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    Very well said and also very true. It's hard to gain the proper perspective of our place and the Earth's place in this vast cosmos. I can see you not only understand the bigger picture but you embrace it as well. Kudos to you poet! Your imagination knows no limits and that's a good thing


  • RawrSmileBabyPlz
    July 6, 2008

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    Good i liked this poem alot. Short but you made your point and i like that. Good job.
    ..<3..
    Shelly