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Feather


Close your eyes
it is the best way to see

I'll stroke a feather down your face
do not speak

eyelids remain silent
for what is meant to happen
will






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  • Virgoan
    July 31

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    I like the hanging effect of this piece. On a personal note, I prefer an added word or two will definitely make this a better piece.

    Thanks for sharing your gift.


    HENSLEY