The sun has cast her fiery gaze
with loftiness on earth below,
in promise of much warmer days
such grace does heaven show.
Reflected on this scene of peace
as night drifts slowly down,
this glimpse is merely just a piece
of creation's finest gown.
As dark descends the silhouettes
complete this scene of awe,
a view you can't forget
a part of nature's law.
For mother nature takes great pride
in the grand design she weaves,
such visual beauty she'll provide
and you're wonder she'll achieve.
Author notes
Picture Credit - Magical Sun Over Lake Crescent by Christine Tipp
Rhyme Only
In a list
A contest entry
- Picture Inspiration #7 by Frodofan.
300 points, ended July 13, 5 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Comments
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excellent
wow, such an amazing take on the picture. So very well crafted. Best of luck in the contest.
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butiful mum
awsome end...
For mother nature takes great pride
in the grand design she weaves,
such visual beauty she'll provide
and you're wonder she'll achieve.
xxx cheeky xxx
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I felt that this line didn't quite fit the rhythm you had going, "a view you'll not easily forget" maybe something like, "a view you can't forget" would flow more smoothly with the rest?
Really nice. Made me really think of Hawaii (I went there once years ago!). I often find it very hard to write nature poems, but this is a good one. Thanks for entering!
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