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I'm unsure about the humans of Sea and Land not realising they've gone too far out

This is a trespass

This is about a boat that capsized
This is when people went over board
- washed away with the tide

So lonely, the sea thought that being here next to land was the most simplest place to be
but what is he/she of sea were to play with simplicity and seduce the dry sands to make an island half of liquid, half of solid? Sure it would be an image of swamp caught in mediterranian meaning but being there
would it create life for the unique?

Picture people approaching it as if entering another planet
Not of Mars or Venus but of something more frequent to Earth, more closer to home, a simple guide to a natural science that experiments with
the creaters makings

it's like distorting a vision
remixing a song

the boat, the two materials and all of those people

This is about a boat that capsized
This is when people went over board
- washed away with the tide

This is when originality was forgotten and eveything became over the top,
or over board
This is when idea rolled off to shore

These are the places similar to the place of being lost in your own mind

These ideas of mixing sea and sand to make something that half of the world wouldn't understand would be land that tried to triumph

So tie up the canoe before it capsizes
Turn off the thinking caps
and sink your own mind in nothing instead of sinking (what's left of) dry land into the ocean

A notion doesn't have to be a forever growing tree or flower
don't over feed your mind I told the world because greed will become of you
and you'll regret these actions when all your material has died


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  • Lanternhearted
    July 16, 2008

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    If we sat for dinner, somewhere perfectly between us, I would forego the hello with immediate question:

    "Can a true re-creation, or even 'distortion', of the original ever be un-novel?"

    If you said "Of course!" I would ask you if the attempt was valid.

    I would ask you, "Do you not value the loss of self and world and all things to stir within thoughts?"

    And, "Do you have a penchant for Nothingness?

    "Do you think the proper seat is the only necessity?"

    If you said 'yes' to these questions, I would be fascinated. If you were confused at me, I would be the same.


    • LeanneBridgewater
      July 17, 2008
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      yes

      confusion is the highest sensation offered. confusion is the fusion of blissed and now you've kissed that upon my cheek and my cheek blushed!

      i like your words.. are these free thoughts?
      xx