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Bound and Restricted - (title not definate...)

I have these chains around my wrists that I can’t seem to loosen or take off. These chains that are bound so tightly around my heart; restricting, restraining, holding back my love for you. I just want to set it free, to let it out, to scream at the top of my lungs that I love you and I’ll never let you go. I’ll never hurt and I’ll never leave you! Release me, baby, please? Take off the cuffs you welded on; let me love you, let me hold you; let me be the one to care for you. Please… I’m begging you. Tell me you love me and that everything is going to be okay; that the hurt and the pain and the confusion is going to go away. Tell me we can be together now. That the hard times are over and I don’t have to suffer anymore. Make me strong again… I’m scared to even speak your name…

The chains are growing tighter, squeezing the blood from my heart, tearing holes, causing damage, pulling me apart! There’ll be nothing left of me… Tell me you love me and you’ll never leave me. Please… You have the key; you ARE the key… Open the lock. Make it better. I feel so torn, so broken, so lost, so cold… Make me warm again. Heal the damage this cold metal has caused my constantly breaking heart! My wrists are sore from being bound so tight. My hands are numb and cold. I need you baby. I need your love, your touch, your kiss, your warm, healing embrace. I’m so lost. This prison is so dark, and cold, and damp, and… empty. Please save me, baby, I think I’m drowning. Take my hand and pull me from this darkness. Save my life; my heart… Oh, God, Please help me through this… I can’t breath! I’m so scared…


Please… I’m so lost. Come find me… I need you.

JADE RAYNE*FrownCry

 

Author notes

This is just rough... It just came to me when I was feeling down. I hope it sounds alright. I'm not a great poet, or anything, but I think this counts... You tell me. Much love, JADE*

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  • Lowell Poe
    July 15

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    Very Hitchcock,
    It had a visual feel to me...if that makes any sense....
    Had a Walt Whitman feel to it also....
    On the roof tops calling out his works.
    It conveyed an almost panic mode..
    that I felt anyway....like you need help as I read.
    You conveyed a feeling gypsy,
    that's what poets do,
    So this is Art to me.

    Blessings always,
    Lowell Poe

  • pinkiesheart
    July 11

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    i LOVED it

    this is the story of my life right now. i want to love her but I'm waiting for her to reel me in. She is the only one i want and she has the friendship cuff still wrapped around my heart because she is afraid to get hurt. This poem really hit home i almost cried.