The skin I'm in
out-
side mimics dew-
drops from pores
pours like water-
falls from finger-
tips out in-
to forest chilled air:
MOIST
End.
Author notes
hawaiiansolt chose option 37 (moist in under 30).
A contest entry
- Fifty Options --- Big Points --- FIFTEEN MORE!!!!!!!! by x--nocturnia--x.
2000 points, ended August 27, 2008, 39 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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Most peculiar yet well done! Like haiku in it's odd and gentle poetry, thankyou for this entry and best of luck!!
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Well, you asked for unique and original, so I took you at your word. Peculiar is a good thing, yes? Thank you!
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Check it Out
Clever. But still, I like your poetry set to your own original music at www.nakedadam.net
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