Such mournful moisture drips:
impact craters explode and freeze-
preserved momentarily
in the once baby powder sand-
just above the undulating
line of the tide
rising in waves of subtlety
on a mission to erase all of human sorrow;
pulling our tears
into the ocean of eternity.
Author notes
hawaiiansolt
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This is very nice, I really love your word usages here. Great descriptions and such
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Thank you for the compliment! I love your paradoxical name!
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You're welcome and thank you very much!
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