HAIKU
Gypsy Butterflies!
In the toxic air
Enjoy your final flight
Gypsy butterflies!
Lullaby in Clouds
Give me wings to fly
Someone in the yonder clouds
Sings a lullaby.
Dreams of Paradise
In the burning eyes
Woes and tears, all sizzling;
Dreams of Paradise.
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Haiku is one of my favorite poetry forms and yours here are lovely, so well written making the reader feel their gentle touch
Beautiful imagery.
Dee
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Love these little gems...
I've only recently gotten into haiku, so to see them so expertly written is a real joy to me. Also, to see the imagery & word choices you've used make them a traditional & heartfelt write that remain truly awe inspiring...
Well done!!!
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superb
i have never done haiku b4 but this poem flows great and packs quite a punch .. good stuff
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Wow!
I just started writing Haiku & these are all great! Very poignant, visual & thought provoking! Nice writes. You may want to post these individually.
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Not usually a fan of Haiku, but i love the way that this is done.
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