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Gypsy Butterflies, Lullaby in Clouds, Dreams of Paradise

HAIKU

Gypsy Butterflies!

In the toxic air
Enjoy your final flight
Gypsy butterflies!


Lullaby in Clouds

Give me wings to fly
Someone in the yonder clouds
Sings a lullaby.

Dreams of Paradise

In the burning eyes
Woes and tears, all sizzling;
Dreams of Paradise.

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  • Fritz O skennick silver member
    July 25

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    Love these little gems...

    I've only recently gotten into haiku, so to see them so expertly written is a real joy to me. Also, to see the imagery & word choices you've used make them a traditional & heartfelt write that remain truly awe inspiring...
    Well done!!!


  • teddybare
    July 15
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    superb

    i have never done haiku b4 but this poem flows great and packs quite a punch .. good stuff


  • Kathleen a Nazarene
    July 6

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    Wow!

    I just started writing Haiku & these are all great! Very poignant, visual & thought provoking! Nice writes. You may want to post these individually.


  • NyteShade
    July 6
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    Not usually a fan of Haiku, but i love the way that this is done.