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This Gun Does Not Magnify My Penis!

Breathe...

In Latin 'soul' is the same as 'breath'...
Trendy, Hot-Topic mass death
On black T-shirts!

No wonder tomorrow hurts!

I suppose I could be
Some simpleton teen with a machine gun
And dud pipe bombs that would serve me better
Shoved up my anus

I could cry
I could shoot
I could cry my worries away:
Living takes too much effort!

These veins would better serve
Someone with balls

And this breath would better serve
Someone who can breathe.

Hey!
May
Many more like me
Fade away
Today!

Author notes

I was thinking about the whole Columbine thing, the apparent need some guys have to abuse firearms, thinking they can validate their pitiful existence.

What is the crazy?

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  • sidewinder silver member
    August 2

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    i don't know what it is about these times... where people can't adapt to their surroundings..or are so screwed up within their minds that all they think about is revenge... tis sad times these are!


  • bigpapa
    July 30
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    Excellent

    Trendy, Hot-Topic mass death
    On black T-shirts!

    What a great line.


  • symitar Moderators member
    July 19

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    Sad how times have changed - but then again, so many changes are good too. I'm so old that when I was a teenager, nobody even thought of bringing a gun to school, let alone shoot someone with it. Of course, we couldn't wear jeans with holes in them and our skirts had to be long enough to at least be in the same general area as our knees! lol Not sure how to explain the changes, to be honest - or if it can even be done.

    There is an intensity here that makes this very edgy and I really do like it. Another good one from you, and I always enjoy reading them.

    becky


  • weewatto
    July 16

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    dude...

    ...word.

    And I don't say that very often, being a farty Brit and all. But you're absolutely right. There has to be something to the fact that so few instigators of these kinds of crimes/incidents are female, it HAS to be a testosterone/bollock related thing.

    This is very beaty. That doesn't normally appeal to me, but I likey this one.

    Much lurve x


  • Lish
    July 10

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    It's not how big your gun is....it's how you use it.
    Technique is better than size, afterall!

    On a more serious note...it IS sad how some people (and not just guys) feel the need to validate themselves by taking lives or resorting to abuse.
    'Tis a sad world in which we live.


  • Dawlface
    July 7

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    I only clicked on this cus' it said peenis




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