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19. The One I Truly Love...

We sit on the bed
Talking about our ups and our downs.
Although together for six months isn't to long
We treasure it.

Listening to the music that lifts our souls
We sit  feeding each other strawberries and chocolate.

We sit on the bed in my room

I lay in his arms and my head on his chest

When I move my Head just right

I can listen to his heart beating...

He pops open a bottle of champagne

And pour two clear glasses half full

As we make a toast for our half year...

 

He looks deep into my eyes as if they are oceans

I feel him holding onto me as if he will never let go!

He gets up and takes off his shoes and shirt

Leaving him in just his basketball shorts!

As I lay their on the bed I see him pick up a platter 

Wondering what it is I sit up slowly.

He looks at me and smiles.

He slowly lift up the top and on the platter there is a box

I sat down the platter and he took the box.

 

As the guy I have been dating

Gets down on one knee

He looks into my eyes again but as if they were the sky...

The words that came out of his Mouth made my head drop;

"Six months today we started dating

I fell in love with you the day we met

Andrea Leigh White will you take my hand in Marriage?!?"

I started to get tears in my eyes and quickly nodded my head!

 

Soon after he kissed my forehead and slipped the ring on.

I lay back down and he lays beside me with his head on my chest.

I knew he was the dominant in our relationship..

He started to rub the inside of my thigh

We lay the on my soft velvet blanket. 

At that moment he was my irresistible desire....

 

After he purposed I felf as if he was my world

Our shorts slowly fell off,

The feeling of his body on mine was indescriable!

After awhile we moved positions.

 

And the feeling he gave me was amazing,

My heart felt as light as a feather.

We had both had our shares of orgasms

He got off inside of me!

We didn't even use a condom

The last time he got he pulled out and grabbed a napkin

And got it dirty with his juices..

 

Twenty- nine days had passed by after our six month annerversity

I went to the doctor's and found out

That night we made our passionate love

We also conceived our first baby boy.

The night that we had was most deffinitly the best day of my life.

I will always love him, and the child we have together.

 

I wake up every morning to roll over and to see him glaring into my eyes

As if the are galexies from beyond.

And a son that loves me and calls me mommy

Those two boys are the only things that can always get me to smile...
 

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  • TeenageTears
    July 10, 2008

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    Beautiful, I'm really jealous lol.
    This is a wonderful poem, it could use a little work on the flow but still tells a lovely story.
    Good luck and thanks for entering.
    TeenageTears.