[ dry hard boulder glare ]

dry hard boulders glare
basked hopes in scorching sun
stream of tearful dreams

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• Haiku IV by Kelli Marie. 3500 points, ended July 14, 43 entries
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  Kelli Marie
  July 6
  
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  "Stream of tearful dreams"...very well crafted haiku. I enjoyed it very much. Thank you for entering the contest.
  Kelli
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  Sandra R Reynolds
  July 6
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  very good and like the background gooes with it.

  
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    crimsondew
    July 6
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    Thanks dear!
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  marlene47
  July 6
  
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  Aha, I like your stone background.
  I like the glare of boulders in the sun contrasting with a dreamy stream.
  Marlene
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    crimsondew
    July 6
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    Thanks dear!
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  Karl Weiss - Topaz
  July 6
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  A lovely piece, my best wishes always.

  
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    crimsondew
    July 6
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    Thank you

by crimsondew

On Jul 6 4:06 AM
Last login October 3

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