a drink of water
flowing between easy sips
of rock clutching hope
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A contest entry
- Haiku IV by Kelli Marie.
3500 points, ended July 14, 43 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
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This is really beautiful. I like the thought of "rock clutching hope" Thank you so much for entering the contest.
Kelli -
I like your flow of sipping between clutching - refreshing and concentration together.
Marlene -
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Thank you so much Marlene for your lovely words....
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You wrote like a poet. Hydrologist in me could not touch subtle beauty..very nice write sister..wish you all the best
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Thank you so much bhaya, your writes on this were profound!
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Haikus aren't usually my thing. I think that's because I can't write them worth a crap. You, on the other hand, do well at it. Goes perfectly with the picture. Cheers.
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Thank you so much for your kind words..do give it a try , I am sure you can do it..the modern haiku does not even restrict the number of syllables so much
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I might give it a try in the future when I'm feeling froggy.
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lol all the best anyways!
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