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Summertimes Don't Need Drinks

Lemonade, ready made
Sugarless Kool-Aid
Malibu drink, Malibu Barbie
I don't need to be drunk
But I'm ready to party

A contest entry

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  • judyjudyjudy
    July 17

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    Always nice to diversity when you're trying to keep cool. You are right -- it's not necessary to get drunk to have fun.

    Thanks for a taste of these different beverages.

  • Wayne Leon Learmond
    July 6

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    A great little poem, with a good rhyme too. You also have a superb message within this piece that you don't need to be drunk to enjoy yourself. Well done. Good luck in the contest.

    Darkest
    Love
    Wayne Leon


  • LionessK Greeters member
    July 6

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    welcome to allpoetry

    Very nice... a great message/statement put into poetic form. Thank you for sharing your words. I hope you will continue writing.


    ~Kristy