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Little Girl

A smiling girl, pretty face
High pitch voice, but a waste of space
She doesn't know the meaning of life
But all the pain and all the strife
Full of hope and wasteless dreams
Not understanding what anything means
But it's good for her, she doesn't know pain
But being naive, she's to blame
Wishing, hoping, optimistic view
This little girl, she is you

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  • the tempest
    July 8, 2008
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    love this one!!! i enjoy short poems that have a big message