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What you do..

Those warm mornings I wake with a smile,
are those days I remember how lucky I am,
to have someone like you who loves me,
So happy to realize you chose me,
so happy to know you truely do care,
and those late nights at 1 am,
texting you hopeing you're happy.
And seeing you smile absolutely makes my day,
you're cheery words soothing my anxious soul.
Calming me, tranquilizing me.
Making everything seems so bliss,
only your words so sweet,
can make me jump off my feet,
with happiness and love
so bound tight,
in my heart of which youve stolen,
so sneaky and sly,
i can not deny,
but with my approval of your sinful deed,
i trust you to charish,
and not to break.
or let into wrong hands.
My heart is yours,
locked tight between your fingers.
hold me tight, dont let me fall,
im fragile, i break easily.
So be easy, and keep me entertained.
I dont want to be ashamed.

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  • Welcome to All Poetry

    you have writen with a wonderful power of emotion that is mind gripping and intense meaning that the reader can share and live in your words. the flow of the write really helps to move it along so that the reader keeps intrest. the ending is a wonderful write and I love how it has a feeling of being bubble wrapped it self. a wonderful piece well done.

    Charlotte
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  • Welcome to AllPoetry

    Powerful ending of I don't want to be ashamed.
    Excellent flow of emotions and thoughts, beautifully penned


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