I still miss you,
sometimes
and that's ok,
leave me
No, it's not ok
if she's there, then you're there
the cruel scarlet curtain
hiding the stage
tormenting the actors
A contest entry
- 10/30/30 Quickie by AngelKat42.
715 points, ended July 6, 2008, 10 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Comments
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the emotional pain screams from this page and jumps right at me.. losing someone no matter what the reasons are hurts like hell... the pain is strong and quite powerful. the imagery within this poem is amazing..
thank you for entering & for writing this poem
good luck
kat
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Pain in this.
Nice.
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oh, what lovely imagery in the last 3 lines! I really like the indecision almost in the first part of the poem...wonderful!
Thanks for sharing this, and all the best in the contest,
Luck.
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