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The Gift

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Red roof antiques

purchased pottery

happened upon

the collection

'not for sale'

wooden bust of women

how to describe

all so different

yet sisters and quiet

the same

carved 

delicately

detailed

inquired about them

no the dear elderly lady said

my son collects

turns people away

every day

We talked the son

and I

women were carved

felt in my soul

for meditation

for women

hold the wood trace

lines facial features

feel ourselves

our worth

not for men's lust

hearts touched

in understanding

I sit here looking

at the carving

that bears my name.

















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  • penman gold member
    July 26
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    Excellent

    Wow, what an amazing creation. Truly is amazing. Thank you for sharing.

  • Beautiful Picture--Beautiful words--Excellent composition!!

  • I love it when art speaks to someone! I found a picture at a garage sale (1800's french court). The artist is heard of, but not easy to find. Then, low and behold, a lady I clean for has the sister picture! But no sale sigh...

    Anyways love the sort of driven, hungry, enchanted feel to this!

  • arafura
    July 6
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    Lovely poem Rheea. I'd like to see that carving!


  • Sagerider
    July 6

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    I Love it.

    I enjoyed it. I used to go with my daughters looking at antiques. most of my poems have some basis in personal experience too. LULU

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