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In the lake of tears.

Chaos of life forcing her to drown
responsibilities pushing her deep inside,
in the lake of tears,
Each star encouraging with its ray of happiness
pumping courage in her heart,
as she clings to the life support.
Though every relation on the earth
melts to make the lake deeper
she still holds on for happiness and smile,
like an insect finding solace in flowers.

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  • SabaSophiya
    March 19

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    A beautiful execution of delicate imagery!!
    I particularly like the last line:
    "like an insect finding solace in flowers"

    Best,
    Sophie.


  • Venugopal gold member
    July 23, 2008

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    Oh! beauty, beauty...one that fills the heart with joy..wonderfully penned dear sister


    • Aliya Abbas
      July 24, 2008
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      thanx for appreciating my work.
      and thanx for the applause as well.


  • Angelflower
    July 10, 2008

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    awww. this was really sad and sorrowful yet it was wonderfully written as well.. I really enjoyed this.. the imagery was really vivid and detailed.. thank you very much for sharing.. best of luck..


    Angel