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Love’s battleground

  Without you, I may as well
   be thrown violently
    against rocks
     discarded to be,
      a destitute
       shipwrecked soul


          …and then I was

       

            Still, 
            I hold no shame 
            in the tears that fall.

Author notes

30 words...forgive me, I went two over..sorry but could'nt be helped

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  • rbruce gold member
    July 15
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    What a wonderful take on the prompt. You deserve the gold.


  • kiwigirljacks gold member
    July 9

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    Aww.. this is so precious!! And yay for that shiney gold that you very much deserve sis!!


  • Immortal Obscurity silver member
    July 6

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    This is gorgeous sweetie, you totally deserved that gold trophy! Well done, and much ♥

    Laura x


  • Cannonsfire silver member
    July 6

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    Yay a shiny gold thingy Congrats on a well deserved award!!!! Way to go Cuz Love, C


  • LadyDementia gold member
    July 6

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    Congrats on the gold!

    Wow this is awesome! Some very powerful emotions here hunni. Couldn't pick a fave part as its all so good. Simply stunning, so glad it got gold

  • x-Black-Butterfly-x gold member
    July 6

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    this is a beautiful and powerful write and the words do truly add something emotional and more meaningful to the picture. well done

  • Sensual Angel gold member
    July 6

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    this is one very powerful, emotionally packed poem.. I'm blown away.. our words and emotions are very powerful. to be able to pen these emotions on paper, to have such an effect on others who read them, is a gift.. one that will grow with you. there is no need to forgive.. I'm not worried about 2 words, the important part is that you wrote your feelings and shared them.. to me thats way more important than worrying about two words..

    this is another one that is me right now.. though I have been unable to cry.. I hold no shame either, its just I can't find my tears, I know they are there.. but hiding for the moment..

    thank you for entering & for writing this poem

    good luck

    kat


    • CinfullyDelicious
      July 6
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      I am more then glad I could deliver for you

      and am sorry your feeling down..I do hope it passes

  • Luckintheshadows
    July 6

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    ooooh...wow! brilliant, superb imagery, such emotion packed into so few words, stunning!
    Thanks for sharing this, and all the best in the contest.

    Luck.

  • Jeremy0826 gold member
    July 6

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    Great work with this picture
    prompt and all the best to you
    in this contest! Keep it up!




    Jeremy0826

  • markgrif gold member
    July 6
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    awwww
    No shame in tears - truth

    Nicely penned.

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