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my first poem

hey all poetry.com this is my first poem on this site
or maybe i shouldnt say poem but free write
id like to start by saying who i am
i am narutoway
just like everyone else i am unique
i am made up of pain, resillience, and courage
i am tired of learning and never knowing
so i am deciding to search the world within me
i am a pesimist, a realist and an optimist.
others call me comfused.
here i am all of me. take me as i come  

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  • PhantomsAngel87 Greeters member
    July 7

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    Welcome to AllPoetry

    Excellent first poem/free write on this site
    You have shown yourself for what you are and show a great poetry side

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    Enjoy AllPoetry
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  • StormGoddess Greeters member
    July 6

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    Welcome to AllPoetry!

    Actually, I think this is brilliant... to post your first 'poem' about who you are so everyone gets to know a lil' bit about you. I also like the fact that you see yourself as both things on the good side and the not so good side (pesemist and optimist together). That indeed would make you a realist. Well dome.

    Welcome to AP. If you have any questions or need help with anything, feel free to IM me.
    Keep expressing through writing.
    Storm
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