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Summer Storm (haiku)

branches sway in gusts
dark skies signal coming storm
early night fireworks

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grannyeri

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  • piccola silver member
    August 8, 2008
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    I can see it coming! Reminds me ... we were watching the banquet and all that coming for the olympics. Beautiful ceremony! this is a great haiku; thanks for entering


  • Cynewulf
    July 10, 2008
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    Nice imagery, I can hear the thunder! reminds me of the English summer.


  • Harrisham Minhas
    July 8, 2008

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    Thank you for your Haiku:

    branches sway in gusts
    dark skies signal coming storm
    early night fireworks

    This is wonderfully done.

    Thanks again.

    Harrisham Minhas


  • Harrisham Minhas
    July 7, 2008
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    'early fireworks' contains 4 syllables. Please rectify it.


  • tomisb
    July 7, 2008

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    We are in love with being safely frightened. The rush and the swoon of just escaping doom. You capture many things in this short sweet haiku.
    Love,
    Tom B.

  • piccola silver member
    July 6, 2008

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    I really like the end. It surprised me ... the aha! that Haiku Monk teaches in his class. great job.

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