branches sway in gusts
dark skies signal coming storm
early night fireworks
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grannyeri
A contest entry
- Haiku Contest ---for Visions through Haiku Members only. --- (Those who wish to be a member, apply through the application link inside) by Harrisham Minhas.
475 points, ended July 9, 12 entries
Bronze trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - Haiku by Piccola.
450 points, ended August 9, 16 entries
Silver trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
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I can see it coming! Reminds me ... we were watching the banquet and all that coming for the olympics. Beautiful ceremony! this is a great haiku; thanks for entering
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Nice imagery, I can hear the thunder! reminds me of the English summer.
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Thank you for your Haiku:
branches sway in gusts
dark skies signal coming storm
early night fireworks
This is wonderfully done.
Thanks again.
Harrisham Minhas
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'early fireworks' contains 4 syllables. Please rectify it.
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We are in love with being safely frightened. The rush and the swoon of just escaping doom. You capture many things in this short sweet haiku.
Love,
Tom B.
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I really like the end. It surprised me ... the aha! that Haiku Monk teaches in his class. great job.
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