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Ones Good Twos Better (Mans View)

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When I got home from work one night
I walked in the door and had a great surprise
My girl was standing there with see through lingerie
She grabbed my cock and said its time to play

She got on her knees and undid my pants
All I could feel is my hard cock in her hands
I got weak in the knees and started to sweat
Then out came another girl that I've never met

I thought to myself that this couldn't be
She set up a threesome just for me
When she walked up to my girl and their eyes met
She said come on girl come give my man head

Feeling two tongues not one on my throbbing cock
I haven't done this before but this is going to rock
When I got down on the floor and layed on my back
I pulled my girl to me and grabbed her nice ass

Turning her around to taste her sweet pussy
She opened up I thought damn nice and juicy
putting my tongue in her cunt and nibbling her clit
The other fine ass girl sat on my dick

I felt her tight wet pussy that was riding me hard
My girl started slapping her ass so hard it was leaving a mark
I started to switch positions so I could see
I saw my girls tongue in her ass while she was fucking me

They traded spots with my girl facing towards me
Trying not to cum so I can eat the other ones pussy
Seeing two sets of titts bouncing gracefully
I said to the other one mmm...come on its about to get messy

When my girl was fucking my big, hard, rock pole
I was eating the other then moaned I got to go
The two got up and started to jack me off with their titts
Oh I'm cumming and when I came I didn't miss
                               THEIR

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                                                 By: hotchocolate

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  • darell
    May 1

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    ENCORE!!!

    SPEECHLESS! NEED A MINUTE TO
    REGROUP! SHOCKINGLY GOOD


  • Desire gold member
    January 7

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    Holy Mother of Pearl Jam!!

    Oy!! Now I told myself I would have to go backwards and then move forwards
    anddddddddddddddd surprise surprise to me
    Excellent piece and HOT!!! I am blinded by the Heat
    ...trips over feet...
    -grabs the fan-
    Keep that quill dancing Beautiful
    Thank You for sharing Your Talent and Spirit~
    Many blessings to You in all You do Sweet One
    Best wishes in the contest too
    with much love & light~ Desire~*~


  • Loversdance
    October 30, 2008
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    Now that was hot! Thanks so much for entering my contest.


  • penman gold member
    September 14, 2008
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    wonderful

    Oh my another sizzling creation. You sure do know how to pen these. Amazing.


  • Bosiarbooger gold member
    September 13, 2008

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    Stop it now

    Even a cold shower didn't help. My wife and tried this for a while and it was a mans dream come true. It started with the two of us then the three of us then two of us again only I was no longer one of the two of us. Funny how dreams can become nightmares. great job old memories Thanks ,Boog


  • Skyclad Smile
    September 6, 2008

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    Hot

    Wow, the flow of your thoughts is great! Your poetry is so easy to follow and the imagery...well...lol...I LOVE it


  • moluv10
    August 28, 2008
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    I love this! A man's best pleasure here!


  • Lexie -
    August 23, 2008
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    Damn chicka!!!

    That is some red hot ink you sling girl!
    WOW you rock!!


  • Jeremy0826 silver member
    August 11, 2008

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    Wow, what a night you have written
    about here! I love all of the passion
    and sensuality in this. Great rhythm
    and flow thoughout it! Keep it up!




    Jeremy0826


  • Maxboy gold member
    July 21, 2008

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    It must have been Christmas or Forth of July that S.O.B. is one lucky guy. Why not me.

    So Nice

  • SurrenderMyHeart
    July 19, 2008
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    very hot poem, sounds like something i would do for my man


  • Levesta
    July 12, 2008
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    good write i like writing from a man point of view

  • cherrysmile
    July 9, 2008
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    wow i love this


  • Moonlightdragon gold member
    July 8, 2008
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    very erotic

    hot night well written

  • hardeepb
    July 6, 2008

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    WOW

    A hot moment of a new experience! A first time threesome with two girls sounds off the hook!

    "Feeling two tongues not one on my throbbing cock
    I haven't done this before but this is going to rock
    When I got down on the floor and layed on my back
    I pulled my girl to me and grabbed her nice ass"

    Must be an amazing feeling...this was a great write! Rhyming in erotica is one of the most difficult things to do but you pulled it off very well, better than I ever could! Great write I enjoyed it! 8/10!

  • mcfreeman
    July 6, 2008
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    Hot Double Chocolate

    from a man's point of view!!

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