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Fantasies

Nightmare visions, fantasies
invade my sleep,
like aliens they creep
beneath the covers in the dark
to strike terror in my heart,
to wake me, screaming,
shaking,
gasping, sobbing,
quaking,
convinced I've been abducted.
Oh, God the fear!
But the nightmare is
it was just a dream,
and I'm still here.

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  • aidenspektor
    July 7

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    I've had lots of dreams like that, they're very unpleasant. This is a very good, very relatable write. Nice job.


  • Rovingone gold member
    July 6

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    Oh! I had those kind of dreams when I was a kid. I used to wake up and still couldn't chase them out of my mind. You really caught the feeling in that poem.


  • maralisa gold member
    July 6

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    wonderful inmagination and images with in your word and full of strong powerful emotions
    like aliens they creep beneath the covers in the dark
    to strike terror in my heart,good luck in the contest