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The guardian of Unicorns. . .

Under the fool moon...
The princess calls ...
Come to me.
I will never leave you...
You are my life, and more!

dragonheart1

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  • KayJay gold member
    July 7
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    Nicely told tale... best of luck...
    Ken


  • notorious silver member
    July 6

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    Boldly expressed.
    "Under the fool moon"
    Good line, but I think it could be changed to "Under one foolish moon". Sounds more groovy that way.


  • maralisa silver member
    July 6
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    wonderful in just 20 words you have captured strong feelings of love good luck in he contest