In a world
At my feet
I rule the darkened streets
At a place
Near my teeth
I taste the liquid heat
My glass of brave
Be my slave
Help me sleep it away
When I'm stuck
Over you
It helps me come unglued
In a pinch
News of rain
When I'm in a cloud of pain
My glass of brave
Be my slave
Help me get through the day
Shes a sin
So they say
In the end I know who will pay
Cheers to you
My lovely Brew
Your gonna help me stay blue
My glass of brave
Be my slave
Help me stay this way
A contest entry
- make me feel something. by aanika.
1003 points, ended July 20, 2008, 25 entries
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Comments
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you didnt try to rhyme every line in a normal pattern, and this is by far, your best work. no lie. put this shit in a contest !

