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My glass of brave

In a world
At my feet
I rule the darkened streets

At a place
Near my teeth
I taste the liquid heat

My glass of brave
Be my slave
Help me sleep it away

When I'm stuck
Over you
It helps me come unglued

In a pinch
News of rain
When I'm in a cloud of pain

My glass of brave
Be my slave
Help me get through the day

Shes a sin
So they say
In the end I know who will pay

Cheers to you
My lovely Brew
Your gonna help me stay blue

My glass of brave
Be my slave
Help me stay this way

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  • AnAcousticEvil
    July 16, 2008

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    see!

    you didnt try to rhyme every line in a normal pattern, and this is by far, your best work. no lie. put this shit in a contest !