My body ;
Burned.
My pale skin;
Reddened
Ever so Tender;
To the touch
&& Yet,
My exaustion;
Escapes me.
The pain;
comes from inside
Where i'm missing you;
tonight.
Your humor;
Brings forth giggles.
Your lips;
Bring upon a smile.
The way you say,
My name;
Keeps me content-
A little while.
"Baby Girl";
Keeps me warm
Like your arms;
at night.
Encompassing me;
In love.
My head upon your chest;
listening to your heart-
with delight.
You're so far away now
&& i'm dealing;
the only way i know how.
Keeping;
Your jacket close.
The scent of Ax;
filling my nose.
Swimming me;
through wonderful memories.
You're only gone;
for the moment.
Two more days.
I miss you so much,
But i like it this way.
It will make everything,
That much sweeter-
when you return.
Your;
kisses
wishes
&& words.
I love You.
Author notes
=] You know who you are.
In a list
A contest entry
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Very moving...
Soft, honest, vulnerable & touching...
Sweet & heart warming...
I'm loving your works, very sincere & sometimes thought provoking...
Keep up the good work...
Well done!!!
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Aw
Thank you. =]
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I really like the idea of keeping your love's jacket close to you, as if it was him you're hugging. This is a very sweet poem.
I miss you so much,
But i like it this way.
It will make everything,
That much sweeter-
when you return.
I like this, as I am also missing someone right now.
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Thank you
For the opportunity. I'm glad you liked it.
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Very sweet.
I remember when I once felt thes feelings of completion. Its beautiful and I am so glad you found that other half. Best wishes Ivory.
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Hehe
Thank you. I really do hope you get those feelings back and i'm ever so glad i have as well.
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Also it was great as always >.> lol
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Hehehe. thank you.
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Baby
I love you so much baby, and im home now so hurry and get on ^-^
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I Love you too!!!
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I'm glad you've found happiness Ivory, you deserve it above all else.
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I'm very glad as well. =] Thank you.
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This is good, as always another amazing write =]. I love this write just as well.
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Aw. Thank you. I'm glad you liked it.
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