Stealth-fully in shadowed night
the innocent I shall prey
All creatures of the magic kind,
‘Your death wont be delayed.’
Author notes
Not sure if you will like it..but it's what came lol
20 words
In a list
A contest entry
- PIF-Pic Prompt-Quickie-Reserve 10 poets x 20 words by Cannonsfire.
525 points, ended July 6, 2008, 8 entries
Honorable winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Comments
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"shadowed night"
Simple but true..
"the innocent I shall prey"
I feel sorry for the innocent...
And that ending...KICK-ASS, Cin!!
I can tell why it's italicized & emphasized...
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lol a wonderful take on the prompt sis, its different but amazing written with strong metaphors. well done sis
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Thanks SiS..I tried hard with this one hehe
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hehehe great take on the prompt! Juls
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Thanks Juls
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lol it does look like he is scarily waiting for something lol nice job here. Love, C
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i wanted to be funny for you....but you know im hopeless at it lol...but well I like this little verse anyway too heheh..glad I wrote it
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Lol I kind of took it the funny way but my humor can be macabre at the best of times lol I saw the funny things in Silence of the Lambs too lolol
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hehe i should have known
lol..it is a bit twisted funny..i can laugh at it i spose lol
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Lol...I love this one..It's a darker take on the picture prompt!
Well done and good luck! -
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hehe yep well Cannonsfires knows i so not good at funny lol..so dark just came lol
Thanks
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Meow
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im sure i have written what u dont want lol..but im posting it now anyways hehe
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LOLOLO Promise not too
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