If your lips are burning bright
like fevered fireballs aglow
you'll have learned
not to drink the water
in Mexico
Author notes
20 words on the picture
No offense at all to Mexico, just the first thing that popped into my head from the picture.
A contest entry
- PIF-Pic Prompt-Quickie-Reserve 10 poets x 20 words by Cannonsfire.
525 points, ended July 6, 2008, 8 entries
Bronze trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Comments
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lol.. another cute write! Poor kitty!! hehe
Congrats on the bronze!
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awww this is funny, thanks soo much for the laugh 
wonderful write and congrats on the bronze, deff deserved it
stephanie
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A great take on the prompt, thinking way outside of the box, with not a whisker in sight. Congrats on the bronze.
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Poor Tinkerbell...LoL, but the cat is cuter.
"like fevered fireballs aglow"
Great simile...full of imagery...unique imagery I might add.
Those last 3 lines are wryly amusing and such fun...suiting the fun feel of the title...congrats on your Bronze
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Ok... you did do what I said... went way outside the box... well done!!!!
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lol
too funny bro
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This is different but I love it Bro...something I never would have expected from the pic..and that makes it great .. hope you do well
Ur SiS
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Hey Mexicos not that bad.. ok maybe it is but still! it's supposed to be a secret! .lol.. And you just so quoted a song in this poem of yours...
I really like it.. It's really cute.. Best of luck!!
Angel
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I love this! Best take on the prompt so far!
Good luck in the contest!
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LOLOLOLOLOL I nearly fell off the chair when I read this lolol..well you went outside the box and its very funny
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hehe lol!
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Purrrrrrr
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