Placid purring overpowers,
a pixie’s susceptible mind.
Enticing every emotion,
while flying into the imp’s mouth,
glowing through bloodthirsty fangs.
Author notes
Prompt:
Pic provided
20 Words
A contest entry
- PIF-Pic Prompt-Quickie-Reserve 10 poets x 20 words by Cannonsfire.
525 points, ended July 6, 2008, 8 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - Anything Goes....Or Does It? by lowercase prelude.
1500 points, ended July 8, 2008, 62 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
This was hard to write, so please give me honest responses, no sugar coating....
Comments
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superb imagery, in such a short piece. this was good.
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I love glowing through blood thristy fangs...a great wrote for 20 words.hope you do well
Cindy
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lol Yes I can picture this and seeing the innocence of 'who? Me?' lol
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lol Brain get ready!!!!
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Alright!
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