dream packed for two
inside crystal hearts,
calling moon
to send stars
so all can see us kiss
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A contest entry
- 20 words on... by notorious.
789 points, ended July 9, 15 entries
Honorable winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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Nicely done Cheryl... love the imagery of crystal hearts... beautiful and best of luck...
Ken
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Such a romantic. The world is up in arms and full of good cheer cause you celebrate the many verses of love and charm the devil himself to dance its tune.
Love, Tom B.
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I'd give just about anything I had to be a participant instead of an observer in that dream. Best wishes in the contest.
Sincerely,
Leo Long
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OOO, OOO, can I watch?
The contest silly , what do you think I am a prevert?LOL
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"inside crystal hearts"
You know, you should talk to Swarovski about turning this poem into crystal. (:
"so all can see us kiss"
Well...I'm eye-rolling here...LMAO, great write. It's mystical in an optimistically realistic way (did that make sense)? -
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lol perfect sense and blame Weltt for this one cos it was kind of written in response to one of his
Sigh...
C
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Yes - so very sweet this one, C! If I were you, I'd change that "calling the moon to send the stars" to "calling moon to send stars"; but still, a short, yet wonderful poem this one!
- Namita
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Thanks Namita, thanks for the suggestion, you are very sweet
lol love makes you use so many words
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lol
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This was really sweet. I really liked the feel to this.. you did a great job.. best of luck..
Angel
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That's wonderful Chez!
Loved, "calling the moon to send the stars"
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Seems inspiration comes quite easily lol can you perhaps explain that
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