from window sill
to shadowed wall
through curtains
edged in lace
the moon crept in
and touched my skin
with soft caress
to wrap me in its light,
to sweetly seal me,
steal me, from the night.
A contest entry
- QUICKIE 6/10/30 (17 or older) by Blooming Poet.
300 points, ended July 5, 5 entries
Gold trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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great
very romantic
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A lovely read, and congrats on snagging the Gold for it! Well deserved and brava!
Wish I could have more nights like these.
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I think this is beautiful, so sweet a picture you painted, I wish I were living that dream instead of you you.
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Wow...this is evocative? Is that the right word. Whatever it is, you did a really really good job with the prompt, and in general this is a very nicely-written poem.
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the title is very effective because the whole piece is seductive and filled with beauty. congrats on the gold.
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wow this is so beautiful
moon crept in and touched my skin with soft caress
to wrap me in its light,to sweetly seal me,steal me, from the night congratulations on your well deserved shiny
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oooh..Well done on your gold!!! I can see why you won, this is a truly marvelous write here! so sweet, sensuality spoken in every word.
Thanks for sharing this,
Luck. -
What a beautiful write... Absolutely spot on!
Ken
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wow, wonderful poem
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Thank you so much for the chance to try something different, and especially for the Gold.
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