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From The Heart

Shadowed emotions
That are still unclear
Linger in my heart
Stupid feelings of uselessness
Show their ugly head
As I release I know nothing
I have no knowledge
Of that world

But I’m willing to learn
About love
Touching; desire
I have never known that world
But if you are wiling to teach me
I’m willing to learn

I know it seems silly
That someone my age
doesn’t know anything
Im an idiot. Yea I know
But Im myself
My idiot


This is a message form my heart
Listen to it

In a list

this comes from my thawing heart.. can you hear it beat?

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  • corrupt angel
    July 6
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    Truely beautiful! I found it to be quite relateable.

    "Touching; desire
    I have never known that world
    But if you are willing to teach me
    I’m willing to learn."

    I adored your entire second stanza. And the last lines were perfect! Great write!

  • x-Black-Butterfly-x silver member
    July 6

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    a beautiful write that fits the title and speaks with a lot of thought. you do amazing emotive writes well done