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Lunessence

Missing image
Bathed in stark black and white
I see your form in the light.
The harshness of the moon can’t hide
the warmth I know resides inside.

You reach for me.  My heart betrays
the need I have, my inner blaze.
I need the passion of your lips,
the pleasure found as we join hips.

Some will say it’s moonlight madness,
but without you, there’s only sadness.



Author notes

Prompt: Seduced by Moonlight
Picture Credit: http://anathemaart.deviantart.com/art/I-kno-by-seduced-by-the-sun-54774293
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  • DeGraw
    July 9
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    Nice win!

    A sexy write! Moved me!
    Regards,
    Jennifer


  • Rclane gold member
    July 6
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    Congrats on the Silver. Love this part"My heart betrays
    the need I have, my inner blaze."


  • Lucy. gold member
    July 6
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    Creative and sweet take on the prompt. Well done on the silver!


  • toomysterious
    July 5

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    This is truly lovely with a hint of sweetness to it. Congrats on the Sliver and thanks for the invite.

  • Luckintheshadows
    July 5

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    This is nice, well, it definately left a smile on my face, I guess since I can relate, having succumbed to moonlight madness more than a few times I love the way your poem rhymes and flows so well.

    Thanks for sharing, and all the best in the contest.

    Luck.

  • Blooming Poet
    July 5

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    Beautiful. Great use of sensuality without becoming explicit or gross. Very good flow and rhyme also.
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