Built for two,
it still sways,
sometimes late in the evening
when the breeze blows just right
and I remember how we laughed
when we spoke of growing old,
together.
~
Author notes
challenge:
1. close your eyes
2. The hush of honesty will let the first item/material/image you see paint your mind.
3. let the item/material/image inspire you.
my image was an old porch swing
A contest entry
- Challenge #2: a poem in 30 words by Virgoan.
600 points, ended July 31, 18 entries
Honorable winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
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Memories really makes our reason to stay worthwhile. Good or bad and whether we like it or not - it is an unchanging reason. Oftentimes makes us strong.
Excellent.
Thanks for sharing your gift.
HENSLEY
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flawless flow
Great imagery and straight to the romantic point
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My Dear friend,
This is beautiful,just as beautiful as you and your heart! You did a great job on this one... I have some of those thoughts for one as well...*sigh*
Great job my friend!
Best of luck in this contest!
and love
Nyetta
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Such is season weapped in windy wish
the aging leaves to sway in memory...lovely angel poet...
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Simply beautiful my friend!
You draw such lovely imagery with
your words. I wish you all the best
with this one in this contest!
Good luck to you and keep it up!
Jeremy0826 -
Caught it rather nicely I'd say. Did it with a nice tight image and just the right hint of promise and loss.
Love, Tom B.
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