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Finding Where You Belong!

In a world where everything falls apart
And people die every day,
Miracles do occur here on earth,
And I found mine in you that day.

When your lips first pressed to mine,
I knew it in my heart,
But I'm human, and I got scared,
And ran away right near the start.

But what matters deep down,
In my heart and soul,

Is that I came back to you,
And by doing so, I made my heart whole.

I believe we were given pairs of limbs for a reason,
And yet, we only have a single heart,
Why would that be?
Really, it's a work of art.

Two eyes, two hands, two arms.
Two legs, two ears, two feet.
Why were we given only one heart?
So when we find the other one in someone else, we're complete.

And on that day, my heart found yours,
And oh, the angels sang a joyous song.
Because that was the day, I realized,
In your arms is right where I belong.

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For you. You know who you are.

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  • she still smiles x gold member
    August 7, 2008
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    Aww

    This is so sweet!!
    *But I'm human, and I got scared,
    And ran away right near the start.*

    That's exactly how I am. But isn't it one of the best feelings to know that "not everyone who loves you is going to leave you"?

    I hope you showed this to him!
    I really enjoyed reading this

    Wonderful job<3


  • hopelessly-broken
    July 12, 2008

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    truely beautiful piece hun. you really expressed yourself well
    "Two eyes, two hands, two arms.
    Two legs, two ears, two feet.
    Why were we given only one heart?
    So when we find the other one in someone else, we're complete."
    i love that whole stanza.
    the rhyme was lovely, and it flowed well.
    keep writting

    luv always HB
    xoxoxo

  • wow, that's beautiful.

    i hope he knows how lucky he is.