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Silence

Unknowing your voice, but your words I hear;
sight unseen, yet seeing you so clear.
Your strength, a mystery but every touch I feel;
I'll just close my eyes, and glimpses I'll steal.


This sound of silence, for all that it's worth;
because actions speak louder than words.

 

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Prompt 4 the Sound of Silence

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  • Midnight-x-Rose gold member
    July 6

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    Absoltuely true and most beautifully put in this piece, silence is only so much and actions alas anyway matter more than words.

  • Manifestation gold member
    July 6

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    I know this scene only too well and you've penned it beautifully. This speaks volumnes


  • Woodchuck4400 silver member
    July 6
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    Nice job. I love the furtive, playful imagery.


  • intanglio2ring
    July 5

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    What a Romantic

    There's certainly an undertone of love in your writing Beautiful!
    You also convey wisdom and truth.
    Good Luck in the contest - this is lovely!
    Tang


    • StormGoddess Greeters member
      July 6
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      When inspiration floats within, it always comes out good in poetry. Thank you!
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