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Mess up, Breakdown

I know the feeling of being afraid
I know it well-oh so well
I am fearing me everyday, every second
Every week
Oh I feel so weak
How I feel so weak
Someone save me

Go in, mess up, get out, breakdown
I'm sick and tired of feeling so left out
I wish I could be perfect for me
For you, for us, for everything
Time flies slowly, or so it's passed
I wish I had the body of an hourglass
Break me, bend me, tear me up
As long as I am smaller I don't give a F*#%

I try my hardest
But it's never enough-no never enough
It's this chord on my guitar
It's everywhere, near and far
It's in my mind, in my head
It's all I think about in my bed
I am fearing me everyday, every second
Every week
Oh I feel so weak
How I feel so weak
Someone save me

Go in, mess up, get out, breakdown
I'm sick and tired of feeling so left out
I wish I could be perfect for me
For you, for us, for everything
Time flies slowly, or so it's passed
I wish I had the body of an hourglass
Break me, bend me, tear me up
As long as I am smaller I don't give a F*#%

Go in, mess up, get out, breakdown
I'm sick and tired of feeling so left out
Time flies slowly but I wish I had that body
I don't give a F*#%

I feel so weak, Oh how I feel so weak
I try my hardest
I know the feeling of being afraid
I know it well

This is one of my first poems/songs I'm posting...so tell me what you think please.

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  • Welcome to AllPoetry

    Fantastic lyrics that are raw, and honest. I would love to hear this recorded one day; just one small spelling error in the second line
    'knwo' - 'know'

    Wonderful poem!

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    Stay safe
    ~Manda
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    • Thank you for correcting my spelling error. And thank you for liking the lyrics. I do haev music written for it, as I play guitar, and I've been wanting to record it someday, and hopefully I will.
  • "Break me,bend me, tear me up
    As long as im smaller i dont give a fu.."

    I liked that part the best.. Its catchy. Keep up the good work.