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Redemption





Pink and green neon daisies,

purple bursting blossoms


Golden sparkling lily sprays,

rosy red and blue bouquets


White spidery silhouettes

suspended 'neath a silvery moon;

rainbow raincheck

promised from yesterday.



Myriad hopeful shooting stars

one for each of us

wherever we are.



Author notes

Standing in socks
in July 5th humidity,
enjoying city's fireworks
from the park next door.

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  • Aesthete2000 gold member
    July 7, 2008
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    You are surrounded by beauty,
    man made pyrotechnics,
    nature et al!!


  • Pisces rainbow gold member
    July 6, 2008

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    WOW

    QUITE A SHOW

    BEAUTIFUL

    SO COLORFUL

    EXCELLENT DESCRIPTION

    I could almost hear it.

    god bless...


  • Blueskywonder
    July 6, 2008

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    A stunning piece of poetry full of hopeful beauty. Thank-you for sharing your creative self with us!


  • Candy6
    July 5, 2008

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    beautiful

    My favorite:

    Pink and green neon daisies,

    purple bursting blossoms


    Golden sparkling lily sprays,

    rosy red and blue bouquets

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