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Sober

When I'm sober...

It's when I feel like crying
It's when I feel like dying

It's when

I don't know what I feel
I don't know how to feel

Confusion
I'm losin'
All sense in my brain

Seclusion
From you and
I can't stop the pain

Want to forget
Want to let go
Want to give up on the memories I know

Making me fret
Want to let go
Want to throw away everything you've shown

When I'm sober...

It's when I need to get high
It's when I need to get rye

It's when

I don't know what I feel
I don't know how to feel

Just fuck it
My job, quit
Don't care 'bout it now

Just fuck it
Wanna commit
Thoughts I will avow

Stop the bitching
Let me be
Give up and let go of me

Don't wanna hear
Don't wanna die
Maybe I do, maybe I lied

When I'm sober...

It's when I beg for love
It's when I beg for us

It's when

I don't know what I feel
I don't know how to feel

But don't worry, it's only when I'm sober...

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  • July 7
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    I love it, I really do.
    It's a nice view on things, and pretty straight forward.