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TANKA CHAIN A morning in Love

 

 

 

 


Not wanting to leave,
but to stay and touch longer
until morning's light
rises to find our bodies
exhaustively together.

Waking entangled
in the warmth of your body
rhythm of your breath
sings its song upon my cheek
so smoothly I must kiss you.

Your round eyes open
and I fall deep into you
swirling passion
in wild winds of making love
till morning birds will not sing.

 

 

 

 

 





 

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  • SerenityNChains
    July 31

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    A very sweet write full of beautiful imagery. This envokes very loving, and lovely images. Thank you for entering.

    Serenity;F


  • fortyninereasons silver member
    July 5
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    Looking at Cannonsfire's comment... make that 'two to go' down under


  • sheltered
    July 5
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    Excellent

    This is so smooth that I would not have realized it was form.


  • Cannonsfire silver member
    July 5

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    lol Well I think from your writing today I know what you dreamed of most of the night lol...can you send some here

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