cradled eternally
between moon’s dreams
and the next falling star,
wrapped in warmth
of nebulae’s mystery,
as glimpses of light
swirl through darkness
quilted with heaven’s hope,
you drift to sleep
grasping pieces of the night,
with heart opened to a cosmos
created for you alone
Author notes
Reve-dreams in French (I hope that is correct)
In a list
A contest entry
- Berceuse by ea.
1000 points, ended July 7, 10 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
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Very nicely done, my best wishes always.
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I enjoyed the feeling this cosmic night sky lullaby provides in the way of a warm wrap of a comforter, both in imagery and sentiment. Thank you for this berceuse.
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It is correct lol I know because one of my ex's racehorses was called this
Beautiful hun. Love, C
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This is a beautiful write. I love the peacefulness of it. Very lovely. I wish you the best of luck in the contest.
Kelli
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"Reve"...actually it is "Rêve"...but figuring out the "ê" on the keyboard is harder than learning French!
Lovly poem,Azure,the simple title betrayes the wonderfully rich tapestry of imagery you've woven!
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