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No matter what..

Bravely, she travels into the storm
Desirous thoughts solidly form
The heat almost, too much to bear
She needs sexual fulfillment, stand in her way?
A wise one wouldn't dare!

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  • Rhyming From Rehab gold member
    July 7
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    lol...not sure I should touch this poem...okay okay okay you twisted my arm!!!! DANG...if you unleash this kind of woman on society....world watch out! You can't starve a woman (so to speak) and not expect her to become a crazed loon! lol This really got my mind into over drive...now where is that ice tea....lol excellent...WOW and Pop and sizzle!!!!!! ~Trisha~


    • Swangrnv gold member
      July 7
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      l.o.l.

      You certainly have a sense of humor! thank you my friend I truly appreciate your continous support of my work!
  • albymyheart gold member
    July 6

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    Another storm brewing...
    I can just see the intense look in the her eyes with such a hunger and need to be fulfilled. Like a panther focussed on its prey. Yes...better not to stand in her way! lol...alby


    • Swangrnv gold member
      July 7
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      Thanks!

      wow, you can see her? you got great eyesight! l.o.l. thanks alot for your support my friend I truly appreciate it!

  • secberm
    July 6

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    Well done, brother.
    Suggestion: "The heat almost, too much to bare"
    Should maybe read: "The heat, almost too much to bear"
    Unless of course, considering the content, "bare" (meaning nude) is indeed correct and she need not "bear" or endure anything. Perhaps her "heat" forces her to be "bare" then to stand in her way would get one burned beyond recognition. Nonetheless, write on. One.

    Dez


    • Swangrnv gold member
      July 6
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      Thanks!

      thanks for the catch! I corrected it! peace my friend!
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