I only speak out once that's for sure,
I will not be ignored.
And I know just where the credit cards are today.
The last sound will be the slamming of the door,
cause I can't take it anymore,
No ones putting me up on the shelf again.
Oh yes I am pissed,
and I got the keys to the vet.
But I was taught you see,
by the very best.
I am out of here,
no I don't need your help.
I am doing what I like,
and it's gonna cost you "you bet".
"I am gone"
"I am loaded"
"I am woman"
You can sit there watching the tube,
or read a book as you so well do.
But don't tell me I can't go where I please.
It will cost you even more,
if you don't move away from that door,
cause this woman you left in need.
Oh yes I am pissed,
and I got the keys to the vet.
But I was taught you see,
by the very best.
And I am out of here,
no I don't need your help.
I am doing what I like,
and it's gonna cost you "you bet"
"I am gone"
"I am loaded"
"I am woman "
When a woman has had enough,
don't make her strut her stuff.
Cause she may just exchange a good right hand.
Though she is just a little thang,
your face she will rearange ,
but it wasn't her original plan.
Oh yes I am pissed,
and I've got the keys to your vet.
But I was taught you see ,
by the very best.
I don't need your help,
I will do what I like.
And it's gonna cost you "you bet",
for ignoring me tonight .
"I am gone"
"I am loaded"
"I am woman"
If I have to,
I will let you play with yourself.
Just don't expect me,
to sit upon a shelf.
"I am gone "
"I am loaded "
"I am woman"
oh
"I am woman "
"I am hot"
But dumb I'm not.
"I am woman"
Author notes
Enjoyment in life is short lived and to waste it not talking and listening to a game all dAY I DONT THINK SO . I go fishing or go visit someone that still knows the english vocabulary. HAHA I am all woman and I love to live and laugh so we are both doing what we love .
A contest entry
- #102 I am woman by daviscth.
300 points, ended July 11, 4 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Comments
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Hilarious!
I loved it! Yeah! Say it like it is...A well written pen!
Good luck in the contest!
Regards,
Jennifer -
Hilarious!
I loved it! Yeah! Say it like it is...A well written pen!
Good luck in the contest!
Regards,
Jennifer -
Hilarious!
I loved it! Yeah! Say it like it is...A well written pen!
Good luck in the contest!
Regards,
Jennifer
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WOW!!!! Honey, people can learn from this one! What a great job! More women should listen to you! and follow your lead for sure! Great job!
Best of luck in this contest!
and love
Nyetta
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wow this brillaint my friend
When a woman has had enough,don't make her strut herstuff.Cause she may just exchange a good right hand. I am woman ""I am hot"But dumb I'm not.
"I am woman"good luck in the contest
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LOL!!!!!!!!!! This is wonderful and just the type of response I was hopeful of getting for my contest. Thanks so much for your entry.
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tv sports is a total waste of time and it rots away people's brains. i think they do it in replacement for not being allowed to fight wars like men were programmed to do, but what do i know that's kinda random. why else would they get all obsessed with teems and spirit, and different players and follow all the pointless stats and stuff. playing sports i can understand, but watching them, seriously. i do like the way basket ball player move though. ha ha. i've writen too much and haven't said enough
. Rewarded 8
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Yes This Is Fabulous
But dumb I'm not.
"I am woman"
This is just fabulous and all woman you are and it don't matter how big you are. As a woman you have the freedom to do what you choose to do and don't have to take any crap off of nobody that is for sure. What a great write, yes I laughed and I loved it!!! I just love you and the fun you have in your life
Your AP Daughter
Kelle Marie
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oooooooo!!! strong and very voiced!! haha this is such a great poem, the only thing i didn't quite get was the keys to the vet, but otherwise it was really good! I definatley connected with it!
My favorite lines are:
don't need your help,
I will do what I like.
And it's gonna cost you "you bet",
for ignoring me tonight .
"I am gone"
"I am loaded"
"I am woman"
Go you!!!!!
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WOW Stories
You have left me speechless....Katie
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Powerful
It's been a while since I've come in AP. It's refreshing to see raw, powerful writing like this. Especially in relation to women.
Great write!
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