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Forgotten Fall

gliding
past calendar
into autumn’s recess,
Indian summer forgotten,
season’s
chromatic palette cascading,
bitter breeze of regret,
spirals nature’s
limbo

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butterfly cinquain

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  • Lyndon gold member
    July 23, 2008

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    I appreciate the mirror Cinquain. The poem is delightful, poet.
    Best wishes. Lyndon of the Winklings.


  • Pamela A Lamppa silver member
    July 17, 2008

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    Great use of form with this Butterfly Cinquain. Well done, unique and interesting. Best of luck in the judging. ~Pamela