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love i hope

I love you with a love that
shall never grow old a love
that last longer than time
it self  a love so strong that
it makes the skies shatter
and the grounds quake
as i look in to your eyes
i see all the reasons why
my life is worth a thousand
skies though the words i say
are true they still fail to
capture you as words sometime
can do if only you could find it
in your heart to love me the
same way to

 

 

 

have you ever had love grow old

and you tried to spice it up and she

never new it

 

 

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love can make you or break you

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  • HeartBr8ker
    August 16, 2008
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    good

    This is agopod poem but please read the rulse

  • Bigezzy
    July 5, 2008
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    it kinda cool how the background goes with
    the words