Goodbye my love
I can't take anymore
My heart is dying
As you throw it on the floor
They've all left
Everyone I've loved
His arms are waiting openly
To accept me up above
There will be no more pain
No longer reason to cut
I won't shed anymore tears
As every door is shut
No looking in your eyes
And seeing disappointment there
I'll be lovingly held
By arms that truely care
The depression will be gone
I'll only wear a smile
But, don't worry about me
I'll see you, again, in awhile
Please tell me what you think
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Very Good
Goodbye my love
I can't take anymore
My heart is dying
As you throw it on the floor
I always wish there were authors notes
as I read you words
to know if this is from life, or just words
No matter what
I feel for the thoughts of your expressions
Write on
Rick
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Thanks for commenting, Rick!!!! To answer your question, everything I write comes from a personal experience.
Dawn
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That was very sad but lovely!
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Very sad write, written with a lot of heartfelt emotions. Good rhyming and form. Thanks for sharing your thoughts and keep writing.
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