Balance reigns
in mantis proportion.
A temple all your own.
Enlightened within
birth's radiant cone.
Author notes
Inspired by Picture A in this contest http://allpoetry.com/contest/2412699 but I didn't make it in on time. LOL!
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I agre with you..you have revealed the universal secrets just in few words of your wonderful poetry..well done..
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how you redeem the word temple, a wisdom of the soul, and the soul itself. Lovely piece of individuality.
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i love the ending here - it sparks a positive aspect in myself - to be alive and to be breathing life and enjoying it, which is hard sometimes to do but this poem simplifies it - just live
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Precious!!
Now this is one Precious piece with images that evoke what I am getting word: magic- in an enlightened sense
Wild as it sounds but I am getting phrase after reading this: Harm None as Ye Will
Love the last line: Birth's radiant cone~
Oooooooooooooh also mantis proportion
Thank You for sharing Your Heart and Spirit~
Many blessings to You in the contest Sweet Soul
Best wishes too
and much love & light~ Desire~*~
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love it ...short and sweet how i like em!
true measure of an artist when they can say so much with so few words.
Tasha
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I think it is definetly interesting like a haiku without the average haiku form I loved it gypsy, I think you took the picture to a whole new level that only some one with your insight would have seen lovely work again dear
Lucian"
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