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A Letter to The Pen

Dear PP Head,

    I'm glad you took time to attempt a thought
truth be told, you lessons were lost.
In hopes of truly grasping my attention is moot
it seems your mind is cluttered like 80-HD's tooth.

  Here's "Food from THOUGHT", hope you enjoy the life lessons
it can be very lonly out in no mans lands without your weapons.
Even if you held armed granades you couldn't blast off
your words against my warz are purely soft.

  So I decided to just tap your jaw with a caution and a friendly letter
with the hopes(for you) that your THINKing can get a bit better.
Poison eh', what an understatement.  It seems if you're truly looking for
a death notice, I can rearrange it.  Until next time PP Head,
get your weight up, or I may go back to my abusive tactics
and smear your make up!

                                  Yours truly,

                                  The THINKER





Author notes

A letter addressed to the character: Poison Pen one of the many characters created by Swangrnv in the ever so pleasant 'The THINKER's Word Warz' by WiseWithWordz. We, my brother's and I are truly greatful to all who has come to enjoy the "Word Warz" and hope that you contiue to support our show! Our hopes is to entertain you while sharpening our skills as writers. Please feel free to come back anytime. Enjoy! WWWDZ 7/5/08

Note: Psss...a message to this fool Poison Pen, if you dare attempt to tempt me again, I will not be as nice the next time out! Consider this a short fuse...sort of the way that lame dude lives his life, (80-HD). (The THINKER 5*General)

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  • AsIThink gold member
    July 8

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    "hahaha...'PP Head'...lol. That's telling him friend. I think the "5*" has more to do with your 'good behavior' reward system from Pre-K...BUT hey, if that's where you are, peace be unto you...lol. Be careful though mentioning my name...you might get bound and gagged - again. lol...  

    Sincerely,

    80-HD".

    (pssst! WWW, this was hilarious. Nice touch of course; "PP Head"??? lol, now that's straight out of "Poison Pen's" vocab...lol.>>>>>>> AsIThink.)

     

    • hey 80...i'm over here across the highway, hurry quickly...run, don't worry no cars are coming....! [In the midst of 5 o' clock rush hour....tee-hee-heee!])The THINKER

      I thanks you for your comments like always. Always wonderful to know someone reading what you feel! Well appreciated!-->WiseWith...

  • Swangrnv gold member
    July 5
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    l.o.l.

    well, that was mighty cordial of you!(not!) your fake facade of acting as though you wasn't serverely damaged is laughable! fakey- la-dy is right! you're cooked! liked uncleben's rice l.o.l.! poison pen.

    psst! yo, wise! this is short, but very funny! thanks for taking it easy on this clown, he don't know any better you know! l.o.l. the piece was fire kid!

    • thanks for the comment, but then again...you should be thanking me! as a matter of fact i'll charge this to your IOU's as far as your life's concern...don't concern yourself with your life...it's no longer yours to worry about. i claim responsibility over it from this day forward! (THINKER)


      hye lil riiiiccc...ah man...well thanks my boy! always love to get your feeed back comments! (WithWordz i'm Wise!)