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My Path

Missing image
never conforming
to righteous paths,
spin my own tale,
go my own way

even within the gray
I can find a light
leading me to you

and I am home




In a list

A contest entry

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  • leo2
    July 7

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    Congratulations of the HM. If home is where the heart is then all roads lead to the Land Down Under. Your words have found themselves a home here in Texas...lol.

    Sincerely,


  • Sandra R Reynolds silver member
    July 6
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    Gret write.


  • arafura
    July 6
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    Lovely work! Yes... you are a romantic!


  • cricketjeff gold member
    July 6

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    You can be quite deliciously romantic, but take care too far down this road and you start writing rhyming poems about the moon and wine and such things!
    Great Stuff
    Jeff


  • Angelflower Greeters member
    July 6

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    This was really good you did such a wonderful job.. Congrats on the HM...


    Angel

  • Cynthia Gaines gold member
    July 5

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    Awesome imagery...

    evoking beautiful and inspirational thoughts of love, as you describe so well... I enjoyed reading this poem, Chez. Glad to see you won an HM, and thanks for sharing. Peace, Cyn


  • Swan song gold member
    July 5
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    this is awesome dear just flat awesome I loved this my toes are curling


  • tomisb gold member
    July 5

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    When you get to the right star the one just below the one that is always shining too brightly and take a sudden left, I am at the drive in on the right. The one that has the waitpeople on skates and serves those scrumptious shakes. I know how to get to your house and if I am slightly addle pated I just listen for the laughter and I immediately know where to go.
    Love, Tom B.


  • Dalaney gold member
    July 5

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    I found myself coming here first tonight...whether you know it or not, sometimes you are home to a lot of us. Love, Lane


    • Cannonsfire silver member
      July 5
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      Always room for you dear Lane...just got that squishy, bubbly feeling of love inside tonight

  • kiwigirljacks gold member
    July 5

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    What a lovely piece! As a non conformist myself I can relate to that part! And sigh.. to find your way home, what a marvellous thing!


  • Carolina Moon silver member
    July 5

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    How simply wonderful this write is. Fits perfectly I think! Best of luck


  • Lil-Bit Crazy silver member
    July 5
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    ooo sorry i for got to say good luck in contest..... please forgiv eme...

  • Lil-Bit Crazy silver member
    July 5

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    wow.... you made it home yay!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! is it safe there.. im sure it is....... i hear home is a wonderful place....... hehe great write.... thanks for sharing this wonderful write.....

  • breedluv silver member
    July 5
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    Wonderful imagery and metaphor. You always suprise and delight with your words.


  • notorious silver member
    July 5

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    Ahaha, you never conform to "typical" poetry...and that's awesome.

    Love those first two lines...=]

    "even in the gray"
    Why not "even within gray"? 'Within' (in my opinion..) would create more depth...and it sounds nicer.

    Very simply stated but nice job. Good luck (:


  • Weltt
    July 5
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    Simple, perfect, and I love it!! Best of luck Chez!!!

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