Remember to fasten your seatbelt
or you'll bleed to death with a shard of the windshield
underneath your skin, rubbing lovingly against your cheekbone.
Remember to fasten your seatbelt
or you'll be thrown about with shards of glass underneath your skin,
and metal raping your legs, breaking them in ecstasy.
Remember to fasten your seatbelt
you never know what will happen.
Insomnia is a bitch
but quite fun while driving.
Insomnia is a bastard
but much more fun while crashing.
Remember to fasten your seatbelt,
or you'll be the dummy testing cars safety.
I'll snap a picture or thirtytwo
to keep the time and the arousal.
I'll snap a picture or thirtytwo
in envy and oh such a large amount of jealousy.
Until it's my turn...
Author notes
Inspired by the film "Crash" 1996.
Please tell me what you think
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I am so glad I saw the movie to use as a reference point, extremely dark stuff this. Who can that what turns someone on is right or wrong, two consenting adults is really what matters.
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Indeed.
I'm glad you liked it!
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Ophiophiliac.
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A couple things:
'Untill' only has one 'L' in it, and is the word 'sap' supposed to be 'snap' ? if not it's a new terminology to me and I appreciate you broadening my vocabulary
The poem as a whole was really enjoyable to read for me, I liked the repetition and the wording. Thank you for sharing
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